Post by betsy on Sept 19, 2008 1:16:29 GMT -5
Name: blizz--bluekit|bluepaw|bluefur
Age: sixteen moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: BreezeClan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance:
Age: sixteen moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: BreezeClan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance:
beneath all that hideous dirt and muck is a thin coat of blue. it may be patternless but it contains a variety of beautiful and clears shades that can range from a dark greyish purple to a shiney blue. bluefur is well adapted to her thin, short and extremely smooth coat that doesn't give her great heat but it's useful in hot boiling summer days.Picture Link: History:
bluefur's most attractive feature are her wonderful, flawless eyes. there are a pair of bright, crystal/saphire eyes with a deep, ebony black outlining that looked like it was carefully drawn on. her luminous eyes are flawless but there is a well hidden injury -- her right eye is blind but there are no flaw marks dug into her beautiful right eye. she has been through these 'one-eye' conditions and is able to manage her life and many cats have not noticed anything unusual about her. between her silvery muzzles with whiskers the colour of a spider's web is her ebony black nose. she has two average sized, leaf shaped ears. if you look at bluefur, her face features are clear and stand out well.
this she-cat is smaller than average for her young age. bluefur has a well body that's extremely adapted to the wild, her body is very flexible like all cats and she has an unusual boney and slim appearance. bluefur has bones jutting out especially her leg and rib bones.
blizz -- 1-5 moonsPersonality:
cinderpelt and ashfur; parents of blizz who was not yet given birth were lost from their clan. they both were sent with a group of breezeclanners to finish a mission but they were lost and rumours had said that cinderpelt and ashfur had died. cinderpelt and ashfur had soon decided to turn into loners. ashfur was killed by a monster, cinderpelt found his body and buried it.
days of winter had passed and cinderpelt had given birth to blizz, cinderpelt named her after the storm that seemed like a blizzard. it was hard to keep blizz warm. spring had finally arrived and blizz was only a week and four days old, she was soon to be able to open her eyes. a few days passed and finally blizz had opened her eyes but something gold shot towards her right eye and it actually blocked her lens out which made it blind. cinderpelt had been worried about blizz because she had been all clumsy lately. soon cinderpelt drowned when she tried to save blizz from a flood that strangely occurred in the early spring days. blizz was only a month old and was found by a cat called dancer who raised her. dancer was a former member of breezeclan and knew cinderpelt and ashfur, she had told blizz about their deaths and times. dancer knew this because the monster that ran over ashfur was where stray cats were locked up and taken away, dancer had escaped and she was also drowning with cinderpelt and tried to save her but it was too late and dancer had successfully but was disappointed in not rescuing her friend. dancer had become blizz's older sister sort of, she had treated her well for at least three moons and dancer was killed by a hawk.
blizz was now alone again and trapped in misery. one day she was found by breezeclan and this was when she was named bluekit.
bluepaw -- 6-12 moons
she had joined as bluekit then turned into bluepaw. many members had thought that i reminded them of someone -- someone they knew was dead. yes, they have figured it out, i had reminded them of my mother; cinderpelt. they had questioned me about the disappearance of my parents. they were absolutely shocked and sorry. it was strange to bluepaw how the clans had held many ceremonies she had never been through like the ceremony for dead cats.
soon her blind eye secret was revealed, she did not know how it had become blind but the medicine cat knew there was something in bluepaw's eyes and didn't know what to do, it was impossible to give an operation or anything because cats have no knowledge of how to open a part. so bluepaw's right eye remained blind.
there seems to be always an imaginary bright beams of light shining off bluefur's fur because of her great happiness and joy. bluefur is a deep thinker, she takes much time to plan and has an organized mind. bluefur is leader and she isn't a sobby and a 'wants attention' cat, she prefers to be left alone often walking around the camp, investigating and watching her clan grow -- not just the members but their habitat. bluefur has well manners, she doesn't act like a kit or apprentice anymore -- she has matured and ready to lead her clan brilliantly. this small cat may be kind and helpful but she also has a bad side. she has a voice that will immediatley make you agree with her, bluefur only does this because she hates to fail. bluefur can get frustrated when cats tell her to try harder in hunting or dreaming or whatever but she gives every effort of hers each day. bluefur sometimes thinks that no one really sees her feelings while she sees everyone's. This young cat has courage, leadership and action, protector and defender, compassion for her clan, love and she has faith in herself.Additional Comments:
weakness
it is shocking how she catches prey -- she misses almost every time, this is probably because of her eye problem. bluefur is very disappointed about her hunting skills, she may have a high position but she has a very embarrasing weakness that she's no better than a new apprentice at. if she can't hunt that well, this also could mean her ears aren't picking enough sound. cats need ears, noses/mouth, legs and weapons [claws] to hunt down prey but bluefur is missing some of those, probably because she may not have gotten use to hunting without two eyes.
uhmm. yerr that's all ;33