Fallingstar/Leader

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Name: Stonstar
Age: 30 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: StoneClan
Rank: Leader
Appearance:

Fallingstar's pelt could be described as a silver tabby. It's simply black stripes on white fur. The roots of his hairs are white. His eyes are a pale blue, which aren't warm, but not quite cold either.And he has short fur And hes very big.He has a lithe body structure that makes him very fast.

Picture Link:

Dont have

History:

Stonestar always lived in Stoneclan. He's led a good life, and wouldn't change it for anything. It was also quite exiciting. When he was an apprentice, he wandered off and met a rogue around his age. They had fought fiercely. Stonestar had emerged the victor. His mentor had been incredibly proud of him. This upped his confidence and whenever he saw or scented and intruder, whether they be loner, rogue or enemy clan cat, he'd attack. He wasn't afraid that he would lose anymore. Sometimes he did, but he'd just say that he'd been going easy.
Though this suggests that Fallingstar likes fighting, he prefers hunting. Infact, he loves hunting. It's so calming and free. His mentor had always used to say that his hunting skills were amazing.

Personality:

Fallingstar is very quick-witted. No matter what you say to him, he'll think of some cutting response straight away. There's no insulting him without getting the insult thrown back at you in some clever way. He's also a fast thinker. Fallingstar can make choices as quick as lightning. Sometimes, though, he may choose the wrong choice. But when you're pressured with time, what else can you do? Fallingstar is also humble and patient. He would gladly wait for a reply to his question, even if you were taking moons.

Additional Comments:

[kiyana]

I just have a few comments, not sure if Lionstar wants me to say them but I will anyway ^^;
First off, I don't think his name can be Stonestar if he is StoneClan's leader. The prefix 'Stone' should be avoided because it is one of the Clan names. (Lionstar, is this true?)
Second, I noticed that his name was Swiftpool a few times XD Might want to change that!

Third, I think you may need a little bit more in his appearance. How big is he, does he have long fur? Are his paws big and strong or small and dainty?
Just a few ideas that you could add =)

[LionStar]

Well the name Stonestar is fine, but rethink it, Stonestar of StoneClan, not that cool when you think about it. What about Mossstar or Ivystar, if you want to stick with Stonestar then reply saying Stonestar if you want to change his name then reply saying the new name you want

Sorry for the mix-up and welcome to Warrior Forest! -confetti blows out-

(Thanks for pointing that out Pebble)

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Fallingstar

[*~Stormstar~*]

Add some more to appearance.

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Done

[Ţŵìĺîĝ]

You still need to change the name in a few if you want to be accepted.

Also, Lionstar, I could help out with this if you like, I'm pretty good at it.

That's up to you.

[*~Stormstar~*]

Just change the name at the top where it says Name: Then it is accepted